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The Comfortable Old Oak by Alan-H-Bruce

:iconbenin6man:
Hello. I hope you appreciate my critique.

As far as vision I like what you tried to do here. The sexy girl on a tree was really nice. She has a good shape, great pose and nice placement with the tree branch. :thumbsup:

Not as original though. There's quite a few photos of sexy women in nature. So as nice as this is. It's not quite unique enough. Something else needs to happen to make it more cutting edge. Not sure what though. :salute:

I'm not sure what it is but the foreground look just a tiny bit fuzzy to me. Not a sharp as I think it could have been. I think lighting could have been better too. Might have been better in sunlight. :iconsun--plz:

Definitely has an impact. It comes out at you with elegance but doesn't jump out with force. Yeah definitely try again to take this type of photo as a Sepia and cloudy or a full color photo and sunny. B-)

Summary : This is pretty good but it gives me a vibe of a B+ photo that could have been an A+ photo.
Vision = 90, Originality = 70, Technique = 80 and Impact = 80
Definitely need better lighting and sharpness and do something a tad different to make it stand out more for Originality and Impact. :-)

I hope you appreciate this critique and it helps you out.

Peace. :wave:
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:iconalan-h-bruce:
Alan-H-Bruce Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I accept your opinion and comments but feel that your views on the light and sharpness are wide of the mark.
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:iconbenin6man:
Benin6man Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
Oh. ^^;

I meant no offense.

:wave:
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:iconalan-h-bruce:
Alan-H-Bruce Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
no offense taken, I just think your comments on the light and sharpness are incorrect...
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